The great upgrade

The bad guy infiltrated the building quietly. he secured the top-secret computer drive from the desk. suddenly.

a security guard exclaimed him on the camera. ‘stop right there the guard.

My favourite premium word I looted today is?      infiltrated

Spiderman infiltrated the rugby league flied to try get the rugby trophey. he secured the trophey, he detected the security.

and left as fast as he could.

have you use this word be for

 

Elizabeth Year 5 & 6 Blog Post

During CRT, we worked with Elizabeth and used LEGO Spike.  We built a Hopper and had to prototype different legs. We built and tested two prototypes.

I used two different types of leg. By having this long stick legs and at the end it turns.

We decided to change…. The motor because it was dead  and we charge it and is didn’t work so i change my kit and it worked.

Then we tested the Hopper again and it…. Keepet on going in circles.

When we tested the Hopper, it….. Still kyd of going in circles and going straight.  

 

editing challenges.

Editing My Writing

  • I completed all four editing passes 
  • Pass 1: Spelling
  • Pass 2: Sentence Flow
  • Pass 3: Punctuation
  • Pass 4: Vocabulary
  •  I corrected spelling and punctuation errors.
  • I improved at least three words.
  • I added one complex sentence.
  • My final paragraph is easy to read and makes sense.

 

I am going to describe the beach or the shell or waves or lunch using the 5 w’s or explain how waves are formed or sand is formed or how tides work.

 

a beach looks like a  sticks hut and the flour is sand and there are waves of sand and some sticks on the flour. it is always

windy and cold.

2026 winter sports

last Friday we did a winter sports. we played touch rugby against tea pa and New Brighton. we virst tea pa first but we

lost by 6-0 it was so endearing and we had a little brake. I ate a little bit of  peach sauce. and then we did some

passes in a circle and some little kicks. and then virst New Brighton and it was 3-1 and we had a little brake

and we had a walk back to school and it was raining and we head back to class and we went home.